Wednesday, March 14, 2007

basho

With the walls of my
house burnt down, I have a better
view of the moon.

1 Comments:

Blogger Bird said...

i am digging the two poems here. would like to comment more -- articulately, but "digging" it will have to suffice.

ok, gotta try ...

the movement in the jazz - the repeated lines, (there is a style of poem that does that - can't recall what it it is) ....

the simplicity and sudden-ness of basho...

oh yes, i am so articulate.

yours is good stuff.

3/17/2007 8:43 PM  

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